Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Salt-dreams

Watch the skyline

An old poem.

And something new...

Salt-dreams.

A tank of pirates
armed with primary
colours and foam-balls,

one swashbuckling
striped boy

and four or five
glorious black-haired
girls, swim-suited
and dripping wet.

8 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

FUN is the word that comes to mind when I read this. Makes one wish to be young again.

Aniket said...

Salt or no salt... Its sure as hell MY DREAM! lol

"four or five
glorious black-haired
girls, swim-suited
and dripping wet."

It seems you know me so well!!!! :P

Rikkij said...

Who doesn't love salt dreams and pirates? I'm in for the trip. fun stuff, Rachel ~rick

Woman in a Window said...

Visually raucous! I wanna fight too.

Mike-Mike said...

I wonder: Did you go swimming today?

Hope all is well and you and yours are having lots of FUN in the Sun AND Water!! ;)

Ciao-ciao.....

RachelW said...

Thanks all! :) Yes, we swam... and played in a pirate fortress. Aniket, I think these girls are a tad young for you, barely out of diapers, hehehe! :) But go a head, let your imagination create whatever scene you want!

It's hard for me to get online here, so probably I won't be posting daily. I'll do my best to keep up!

Linda S. Socha said...

Fun writing Rachael!
Linda

Piratedred said...

Thanks for the smile Rachel.

T.