If I could lay my hands
on you, I’d scrub you pink
in a steaming tub of froth
then run my rough tongue
over your spine in steady strokes
with all the love and tenacity
of any mother cat.
Your ears sit closed,
the accumulated wax of decades
shutting me out until
my footsteps fade
with muffled thumps away
down the worn carpeted hall.
Rachel Westfall
November 6, 2010
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7 comments:
Such a good poem. Great imagery in this. A very lucky old man.
Thanks, Anthony! I'm not certain where this image came from. This certainly isn't my old man, so he must be someone else's.
Very interesting. My favorite lines;
Your ears sit closed,
the accumulated wax of decades
shutting me out...
I will write to this next noon. I have no time now. It's a great poem.
K., thanks so much for stopping by!
Christopher, I'm waiting..... ;-)
oh, maternal mixed with sexual, and all with love and healing. i like this very, very much, Rachel.
xo
erin
I like the cadence of this. You paint a vivid picture here.
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