So I lap the small seeds
from your hand,
that delightful reek
of you a tingle
in my brown speckled
nostrils, whiskers flaring
into a shower,
a tentative shower
of white spun gold
Rachel Westfall
November 30, 2010
A Little Scribble and an Honorable Mention
13 hours ago
7 comments:
Do you have a rat? I think their faces are cute - it's the tail that gives me the willies, somewhat.
I like the poem though.
Kat
Tell me it's either a pet
or a metaphor:)
xo
erin
Rach
I was gonna guess metaphor
but you bein you
who knows!
Rick
Like the poem, imaging the open hand and the felling. Very good
I have guinea pigs, not rats. I did have pet rats though, at two points in my life. Maybe the rat is a metaphor for something. Or maybe he is just Rat.
Ha!
so I was right
~rick
Ha!
so I was right
~rick
Post a Comment