Hey Rachel! Love the opening line and the play-on-words title too.The last line is the kicker though. Really well done!Kat
Coyote's back.The shadow is laughing along the back of the Coyote who's back.I can see him, but I'm not going to play with him. Way too dangerous. Still.
Ooh, that "frothy comma" stands out particularly well. Great image here, a perfectly detailed outline to be filled by the reader.
At The Rest StopAm I a floweror a wolf, I muse, as youdeclare me lupine.The Cisalpine slopeswere once my favored flavorbut I fear they're lost,for I now am pentif not up, still trapped withinmy defrocked carriage.So flower or wolf?But I would not ask you this.It is not seemly.
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