Your back bent over the garden
as you laid mottled stones in a row:
a highway for slugs or rain-slick
homes for shining black beetles
shovel and rake leaned by the wall
handles crossed like dear old friends
companions in the long winter
months of dusty shed hibernation
and the pansies, reseeded from last year
quite by accident, purple and white faces
shamelessly gazing skyward until you
carefully loosed them from the soil
with expert hands and a rusty trowel
and laid them in loose bundles
on the grass, roots down, tops up: in stasis
as you dig them a new corner row
Rachel Westfall
May 22, 2011
A Little Scribble and an Honorable Mention
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9 comments:
nice imagery ~ i enjoy gardening ~
In Our Garden
I know you watch me
as I dig in our moist earth
searching for worm holes
and the rich castings
found in the passage of time.
My broad muscled dream,
best dream of my life
rises to the heat of you,
your demanding care.
I have planted you
deep in me as if I were
woman to you and love
itself the member.
Oh, wow, Christopher. Christopher!
*blush*
We no longer have a garden. We're now living in one of those human filing cabinets called an apartment building.
Can't say I miss the garden; it was more work than I could handle.
But you have shared your garden with me. That is sufficient.
as always, you still write so beautiful Rachel
I have to say I like the way your poems flow, so simple, so clean and very discriptive.
in stasis
as you dig them a new corner row
I'm in stasis in my life, my out of writing life, so this line spoke to me.
Love that "rain-slick homes for shining black beetles" line... gem among gems. The title adds another layer that makes me suspect there's much more going on here than "just" gardening...
Thank you, friends :)
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